Non poetic days

Aug 7th, 2008 | By | Category: Ireland

It’s grey and it’s raining and it’s miserable and there’s a pile of stuff to do – and the calendar says it’s 7th August.

Why are we not all buoyant?

Why are the trees not sweetly blooming and the wild mountain thyme not growing all around the blooming heather? Why are we not deep in dandelion wine and Lughnasa joy?

It feels like November.

Maybe poets would change things. Poets who can rewrite the story so it’s different. Remember Yeats’ opening lines of Easter 1916?

I have met them at close of day
Coming with vivid faces
From counter or desk among grey
Eighteenth-century houses.

Dublin in the spring of 1916 would not have been happy. It would have been filled with stories of young men dying on the Western Front. it would have been filled with sights and sounds of poverty. It would have been filled with smoke and soot and the smell of drains and a sense of foreboding. And Yeats turns it around in a sentence.

Write what Yeats says in prose terms, and it becomes dirty old Dublin in the evening with blokes coming home from their work, yet in his lines even the tenements assume a romantic aura.

Months after Easter 1916, To My Daughter Betty, The Gift of God, is written by Tom Kettle, two days before he dies. ‘In the field, before Guillemont, Somme, Sept. 4, 1916’. It transforms the bloodiness of the trenches into something of cosmic significance.

In wiser days, my darling rosebud, blown
To beauty proud as was your mother’s prime,
In that desired, delayed, incredible time,
You’ll ask why I abandoned you, my own,
And the dear heart that was your baby throne,
To dice with death. And oh! they’ll give you rhyme
And reason: some will call the thing sublime,
And some decry it in a knowing tone.
So here, while the mad guns curse overhead,
And tired men sigh with mud for couch and floor,
Know that we fools, now with the foolish dead,
Died not for flag, nor King, nor Emperor,—
But for a dream, born in a herdsman’s shed,
And for the secret Scripture of the poor.

It is sobering to read Sebastian Barry’s novel It’s a Long, Long Way alongside Kettle’s poetry.

Maybe we need big things to happen for poets to find the energy to transform things.

Would Seamus Heaney have found the same inspiration had he grown up here, rather than in the rawness of Ulster? Would Requiem for the Croppies have the same sense of tragedy had it come from a writer reflecting on an historical event from a life lived amongst the peaceful and the mundane, rather than someone watching tragedy in his own community?

Do extreme events create a heightened awareness of the detail and the reality all around?

Maybe there is trade off – the peaceful or the poetic? Maybe damp, dull, dismal 7th Augusts are preferable to ones that might inspire a poet.

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  1. It is just after 8 o’clock on 7th August and the blinds is down Joxer the blinds is down.

  2. I was just outside chatting to my neighbour and we both said that we could smell that Autumn smell in the air beginning to happen in the evening. (Devon!!!!!!)

  3. An, shure, was not Joxer a great man for the poems, the darlin’ poems, the daarlin poems?


    The Celtic autumn begins on 1st August, but the meteorological one doesn’t start until 1st September and the astronomical one on 21st September. There were days in the winter better than today.

  4. I take great solace in knowing that your summer is like our winter! As for noticing the little things . . nah, doesn’t need desperate times . . .I’m enthralled by the little things all the time.

  5. We moan about rain, but at least we (or should I say the ladies) do not have to walk four or five miles fo a bucket of water

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